I got my 2nd draft back today and I did pretty well. I just struggle with keeping the reader connected to the story through the narrator, with actual descriptions. You have to do this CONSTANTLY and it's hard! But I'm getting better and that's good, especially because my teacher says that I have a firm grasp of many other things with my writing.
My book arts class is still pretty fun though I have a ton to read before Friday. I'm worried about my final project...it needs to be something of substance, and I have to make 20 copies! We'll see what I come up with.
In other news, I voted today for the local mayor and city council positions. We have the most influence there, so we all need to vote on days like today. Now I'll have the right to complain. :)
Random Sunday Family Photo
2 months ago